This entry is very succinct and a good “aha” moment. The only thing I could suggest: more specific with lawn care example (i.e. what you would use instead of…)

and a bit of info for the bicycling entry ( i.e. most people drive five miles or less for their errands. Those stop/start drives are the least efficient use of cars. There’s also somethign about the five miles being the most acceptable range for people ot consider pedalling. You’d probably have to find out the correct info.)

By the way, you rock, lady!

jj